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Wednesday, 24 October 2018

THE BIG FIGHT!!!!!!!!

in class we have been dowing narrative witting



VThe big fight

One day in the laundry there was a washing machine that came alive. The owner of the house is Godzilla. When Godzilla Goes to the laundry the washing machine opens its eyes. But Godzilla goes to the shop to get food for him and his cat. The cat likes to jump in the pool to get a wash. The pool has snakes in it. Godzilla does not like snakes he gets scared. The next day the washing machine get in a fight with Godzilla. Godzilla started to attack him. Godzilla did a big attack with a hammer, he hit the washing machine it breaks the washing machine and it was broken. And he went to the shop and buy a new washing machine. It does not fight, it is a good one, i does not kill people.


The end

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kodie, I liked your writing, but maybe you should read your writing because some of the sentences don't make any sense. Also fix your spelling!

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