I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 19 September 2018
BLUE PILL
Once upon a time I work up in the woods with my family. There was a house so we went in it there was some breakfast on a table I sat on a char and i broke it when i sat on it we ran away in to a bash i lost my family in the bash so i ran so more there was i root i did not see it and i fall and i blacked out… when i came back to life there was a big crazy monster it said come with me!!! I was thing about it. sod i ? i did followed it back. It is the house that i brock the chair i was scared so i went into the house. I was angry i said why did you bring me here he said you can have a pill he said. I said what are they for. He said to make u better. I said ok i want the blue pill thanks a lot you saved my live bye. I teleported to my family. Thay were so happy to see me i was so happy To see them I was so scared. At six a cock. I had tea it was yum we had pizza i was so hungry i had to wait a hour for it to cook it was yum when it came out.
/bye bye bye bye bye bye.
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